On this page you will find our class’s recounts about our excursion to ScienceWorks.
We would love for you to read our work and leave us some warm and cool feed back. An example of how we give feedback is demonstrated below to help you.
Dear Miss Ash,
Each paragraph in your recount has a clear topic sentence and you provided lots of detail that related to the main idea of the paragraph. To improve your writing review how to use commas to break up sentences.
Thank-you, your feedback will help us further improve our writing.